Feedback on my opening sequences ideas

 Feedback for Idea one (My third idea) 

Even though this idea seems to be very simplistic it comes across to be very effective to my peers, other feedback i received was about the title for the film "swing" how it goes straight to the point but doesn't tell you anything about the swing and has elements to creep you out. Having the sound effect of children laughing creates an intense and unsettling atmosphere to the audience making something sound so innocent become so sinister. the sound effects work really well for the opening conoting with the swing.

Elements i would have to consider with my idea consist of the idea of working with a child for 6 hours as they may tend to have a short attention span and may get drained. the way i would work around this, would be to use someone who i know who looks relatively young and pass them off as a younger person. the fact i have gone so simplistic is great as it gives hardly anything away about the plot of the film however there needs to be a tiny bit extra in the sequence in order to show a little more about the film. with the sound effects of the swing and the ropes i should play with those sound effects to create a more unsettling atmosphere. for example having a parent pushing his kid on the swing, the kid stops but is able to still hear the sound of the swing going and the child looks around and there is an image of a person hanging from a tree making the same sound and once the child starts to swing again the body hanging starts to swing with them playing with the sound effects.

Feedback on Idea 2

This opening sequence would face me with many challenges that I am willing to work around and persevere. This consists of working with a girl in a lake in winter is not safe I could easily change this to a girl taking pictures of a lake and after a picture she takes the man appears in the picture but then when she goes to look he is not there, it sounds to be too much for an opening sequence but cutting out the aspect of the girl swimming it may allow the scene to move on quite quickly. lots that i will have to condense down. you are able to shorten it down in order to make it more effective. its a good setting for your typical slasher horror film. WATER IS MY MAIN PROBLEM, BUT EASY TO WORK AROUND. i need to add something in that makes it realistic with the limitations that i will have, But overall great initial idea i just need to build on it.